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Author Interivew and Book Give Away with Michele Huey

I'm thrilled to introduce my friend, Michele Huey. She has an amazing list of accomplishments, but since I want to include her great story, I'll just tell you that she's an award-winning newspaper columnist, has her own daily radio program, and is the author of two books, Minute Meditations: Meeting God in Everyday Experiences, and I Lift Up My Eyes: Minute Meditations Vol. 2. Both are compilations of her columns and have been sold nationwide.

Michele's radio program, God, Me, and a Cup of Tea is currently broadcast on WMUG 105.1 LF/FM in Indiana, PA, and she has produced three CDs of meditations from the radio program: God, Me & a Cup of Tea: Favorite Meditations (2004), The Ten Commandments and Beatitudes for Today (2005), and Treasures in Jars of Clay: Thoughts on Aging with Grace (2006). You can find her books and CDs here.

As an inspirational speaker, Michele brings the same humor and poignancy to dinners, women's retreats and seminars, and community events. She also teaches at writers' and speakers' conferences, and is listed with several Christian speakers' bureaus.

Michele's work has appeared in numerous national publications, including Guideposts, Home Life, and Teachers in Focus, as well as several anthologies, including Chicken Soup for the Christian Family Soul and One Year Life Verse Devotional. She contributes a regular meditation column to The Upper Case, the St. Davids Christian Writers Association newsletter and writes devotionals on assignment.

Michele is member of St. Davids Christian Writers' Association Board of Directors and Advanced Speakers and Writers Association. A former English teacher, she has a passion for teaching, and currently mentors developing writers for Jerry B. Jenkins Christian Writers' Guild, ChristianFictionMentors.com, and The Writing Academy.

Michele and her husband, Dean, live in western Pennsylvania and have three grown children and five grandchildren.

Be sure to leave a comment for Michele and you'll be in the drawing for her book, Minute Meditations: Meeting God in Everyday Experiences. So, let's get started!

When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer? When I was in about seventh grade, I woke up before dawn and couldn't get back to sleep. So I wrote a poem about the "dawn" and a "fawn." I found expressing myself in writing a kind of release. As early as kindergarten, my love of books, stories, and poems was evident, as my teacher wrote my parents that "Michele loves to retell stories and rhymes."

I understand you were a teacher in your former life. Tell us about your journey into writing. In college I majored in English and took every writing course the university had to offer. But I fell in love with teaching and taught school for the next 21 years. Then, in 1993 I was subbing long-term for a reading teacher and the librarian asked if I could use some newspapers in my reading class. Of course, I said yes, but then I found there weren't any unit studies on newspapers, so I wrote one! I had it printed and offered it to homeschooling parents. A local newspaper bought it to use in their Newspaper in Education program. But that's as far as it went.

But while I was still writing the newspaper curriculum, ideas for stories were bombarding me, so I'd write them on slips of paper and stuff them in a file folder. It was then that I got serious about writing again. I live in the country in western Pennsylvania and didn't know any other writers, so I prayed for God to send me other Christian writers and for courses to help me improve my writing.

I was vacuuming one day and thinking about writing when into my head popped a vision of a meditation column in a newspaper. I was so excited, I turned off the vacuum and called both local papers with my idea, but was politely turned down. Ah, the first of many rejections . . .

In 1994, I entered a story for the Guideposts writers workshop. I wasn't selected, but an editor called me and told me he loved the story and they were going to publish it. "Wisdom from an Old Refrigerator" was published in September 1995. I think you can still find it online on the Guideposts site. I was published in The Upper Room around the same time.

But the vision for the meditation column never left me. I had a lot to learn, though. I found a correspondence course for Christian writers, and in 1996, I started a local writers group. It was there that I met Susan Swan, who'd just moved to town. Not only was she a Christian writer who understood the workings of the publishing world, but she was also the director for St. Davids Christian Writers Conference. She recommended me for a full scholarship to the 1997 conference. So, God answered my prayer for both courses and a Christian writers group.

By 1996, the door had slammed shut for teaching, so I applied for a position at the local newspaper as a feature writer. The publisher told me he wanted me to write people stories. I was hired and I absolutely LOVED interviewing people and writing their stories. The AP picked up two of my stories, and I began a weekly series, People Who Make a Difference.

Of course, now that I had my foot in the door, I asked to write a weekly meditation column. The publisher said no. But one day, six months later, that editor was complaining about wasted space in his paper. I saw my chance.

"You want to see wasted space?" I said. "I'll show you wasted space!" I opened to the religion page and tapped the canned meditation they downloaded each week from the Internet. "Let me write something fresh."

That day, Minute Meditations was born and the vision fulfilled (even though the editor wouldn't pay me for it). I wrote the column for three years, then went to another local, larger paper-which paid me for the column! I could take it with me because the first newspaper never paid for it. See how God protects His work?

I write my column, renamed God, Me, and a Cup of Tea, as a f
reelance writer now. Last year it placed second in the Pennsylvania Newspaper Association's Keystone Press Awards. A religious column placing second for a secular newspaper award. God IS awesome.

What is the biggest challenge you face as a writer? Waiting. Persevering. Rejection. You have to believe in what you write in order to persevere and persist. People often tell me I've done a lot with my writing. But I haven't even scratched the surface of what I'd really like to do.

Why do you write? To express myself. To tell others about God and the wonderful life He has planned for all of us. To show people how to apply the Bible to everyday living. And to give life to the stories swirling around in my head.

What for you is the most satisfying aspect of freelance writing? Working from home and the flexible schedule-both of which allow me to be here for my family. My kids are grown and gone now, but I can write when I travel to my daughter's in South Carolina. I can write while I'm babysitting grandchildren (like right now). I can stop for a few moments when the grandkids pop in. And also the wonderful friendships I've made–the camaraderie with other writers.

What writer do you most admire and why? Cec Murphey. For his candid, transparent, vulnerable, honest, down-to-earth writing. For his generous heart that seeks God. For his faith in spite of trying circumstances.

What advice do you have for struggling or beginning writers? Don't give up. Persevere. Persist. Keep writing. Learn all you can about the craft, and keep learning, no matter how published you are. Always strive to improve. Network with other writers-online and at conferences and writers group meetings. Go to as many conferences as you can afford-to learn and to network with editors and publishers and agents. Join a critique group and listen to what others have to say about your writing. Never explain and never defend what you wrote. If someone didn't get it, rewrite it so they do.

(Vonda here) Thank you for your sharing your story, Michele! What an encouragement to keep working! And if you'd like to be in the drawing for a free book, just leave a comment for Michele. Be sure to check back next week to see if you're the winner!

You can read more about Michele and her writing at her website and blog.

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Registration is Now Open for The Christian Writer's Den Yearly Retreat October 21-24, 2010!

Do you feel called to write, but can't find the time to stop and hear His voice? Then this weekend is designed just for you! Come join us for four days of group instruction and hours of writing in peaceful solitude in the mountains of NC.

The $200 registration fee includes four days and three nights' lodging, nine home-cooked meals, help with transportation from Simpsonville, SC (if applicable), snacks, writing instruction, and free give-aways-and you don't have to cook or clean up!

thecabincovesmallBut registration is limited to the first twelve ladies, so don't delay (sorry guys, but this retreat is just for the girls)! Once the spots are filled, we'll start a waiting list. And don't worry, there won't be snow there in October. 🙂

Be sure to take a look at our video from the 2008 retreat (Thanks, Kimberli Buffaloe!). Click here to download the information and registration form. Edie and I can't wait to hear from you!

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I Need Your Kudos Now!

Next week we celebrate what God is doing in our midst, so I need to hear from you! Had an article or book published? Signed a contract? Gotten an agent or a new website? Started a ministry? Let me know this week, so we can celebrate with you!

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As we seek His perfect will for our writing lives, let's acknowledge the word David received from the Lord and claim it for ourselves today:

I will instruct you and teach you in the way you should go; I will counsel you and watch over you. Psalm 32:8

I pray God's blessing on the work of your hands and your hearts,

Vonda

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Said is NOT a Four-Letter Word! (Well…)

Last week we studied the wisdom of the writer's mantra, "Show, Don't Tell." No matter how compelling your conflict or how intricately you've woven your plot, telling instead of showing can result in a knee-jerk rejection from editors.

This week we'll look at another easy reason for editors to say no: The use of inappropriate speaker tags.

When I submitted my first book, I was confident editors would soon be groveling at my feet, bidding for the honor of publishing my words. After all, I had been proclaimed a good writer by my teachers, my friends, and my mom.

But the most powerful evidence of my skill was the ability to avoid the word, said. With open thesaurus at my side, I was able to come up with a hundred ways to say said without actually saying it. My characters didn't merely say their lines, they responded them, answered them, corrected them, and replied them. They coughed them and hissed them and growled them. They retorted and requested and expressed. But my characters rarely, if ever, said anything.

But instead of engaging in a bidding war for my words, these editors quickly filled my mailbox with knee-jerk rejections.

Why?

I realize now there were many reasons for those rejections, but one glaring proof of my inexperience was the inappropriate use of speaker tags.

Writers, listen to this: Said is NOT a four-letter word! (Okay, okay…I know it does have four letters, but it's not a bad word!)

Here are five guidelines to consider when deciding how to let your characters speak.

1.     Said is often the best word. When you use said, the reader's brain sort of skips over it, almost unaware of its inclusion in the sentence. But when you use a word other than said, the reader's brain will momentarily pause, make an evaluation of your word choice, and decide if you're relaying other information through your speaker tag. If your character corrected, what was wrong with what the other person had said? If he explained, what had been misunderstood? The reader will be more engaged in the moment if we simply use said more often than explanatory tags.

2.     Use realistic dialogue and good description–not said synonyms–to relay the emotion or intent of the character.

3.     Be sure your tag is a word that can substitute for said. Think for a minute: Can we "laugh" words? Can we "smile" them? "Wince" them? "Encourage" them? We can laugh or smile while we're speaking, we can wince as we say the words, and we can encourage through the words we use, but we can't laugh, smile, wince or encourage the words out of our mouths. 

4.     You don't have to have a speaker tag with each line of dialogue. When there are two characters in a conversation, it's completely acceptable to have a few lines of dialogue without any attribution. Just be sure it's clear who's speaking. We don't want our readers to have to stop and reread for clarification.

5.     Instead of said or any other attribution word, you can use speaker beats to let the reader know who's talking.

A beat is an action or thought that lets the reader know who is speaking. In this excerpt from Eva Marie Everson's book, Things Left Unspoken (quite an apropos title for this topic, don't you think?) notice how she avoids any form of said through the use of speaker beats:

     I paused for a moment, trying to figure out what the old man wanted. Surely not to pay his respects for Uncle Jim's passing. Not with him not having bothered to attend the funeral or the gathering afterward. "Is there something I can help you with?"

     He smiled. His teeth bore the effects of years of smoking cigarettes, but the smile was pleasant all the same. "Actually, I was hoping I could help you out some."

     I pulled the long strap of my purse over my arm and gripped it with my gloved hand. "In what way?"

     "I understand the big house here is going to be used as some sort of museum."

     To my remembrance, Mr. Bach was now the first non-family member I'd ever heard who referred to the old place as the "big house." "Yes, sir. That's true."

So, was there any form of said? Nope.

Did you have any trouble following who was speaking? I certainly didn't.

Through the proper use of speaker beats, Eva Marie projected a movie into our minds. We saw the action and heard the dialogue without any direction from the author.

But be careful that you use speaker beats appropriately. This does NOT work:

     She reached for his hand. "I told you I love you."

     He smiled. "I know you do."

     "Then tell me you'll marry me." A tear ran down her cheek.

     "I'm sorry, but I can't do that." He wiped the tear from her eye.

UGH!!

You can save yourself from years of rejection by checking your work for inappropriate speaker tags. It could mean the difference between a bidding war …or a dash to the trash.

(Torn paper photo courtesy of ChristianPhotos.net)

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Writing Opportunities for YOU!

1.     Get your new LIVE editorial needs here. Several CWD readers have been published here!

2.     Bride and Groom writer's guidelines here. 

3.     Good News Magazine 

4.     Crafts ‘n Things 

5.     Guide Magazine for 10-14yo 

6.     Ellery Queen Mystery Mag
azine 

7.     Georgia Magazine 

8.     Her Sports 

9.     Girl Life

10. Living a Better Life newsletter (Frugal Living) 

11. On Mission Magazine 

12. ChristianDevotions.us is always looking for good devotions. Many of our readers have been published here, too!

13. Check here for upcoming Chicken Soup titles. 

14. Cec Murphey's Christmas Spirit is accepting submissions until May 1. Hurry!

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Upcoming Writer's Conferences/Seminars

1.     Anderson SC: Upstate SC American Christian Writers Critique and Editing Workshop, Saturday, April 24. For more information, contact Elva Martin at

2.     Woodstock, GA: Christian Authors Guild Coffee & Quill, Saturday, May 1. Speakers: Jennifer Devlin and Cynthia Simmons. More info here. 

3.      Ridgecrest, NC: Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference, May 16-20. I'll be there and would love to see you!

4.      Ridgecrest, NC: Gideon Media Arts Conference and Film Festival, June 3-8. I'll be there and would love to see you!

5.     Johnson City, TN: Steven James' Novel Writing Intensive, August 19-22. 

6.     Keller, TX: North Texas Christian Writer's Conference, September 17-18. I'll be there and would love to see you!

7.      Abiquiu, NM: CLASS Christian Writer's Conference, November 10-14. I'll be there and would love to see you!

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NEW Blue Ridge Mountains Writing Contest–You Could Win a Publishing Package!

Sonfire Media has announced a new writing contest open to Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference attendees only! Someone will win a publishing package. Could it be you? Check it out here. 

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Ladies in the Upstate SC area:

I'll be speaking in several local churches over the next few weeks and would love to see you there!

  • May 1, Greenville, SC: Cornerstone Church, 10am.  Click on Events and then Celebration of Womanhood.
  • May 8, Simpsonville, SC: Westside Church Women's Brunch, 10am. Details here (But note: Saturday is May 8, not May 7 🙂 Call the church at 963-7262 for reservations.
  • May 8, Hodges, SC: New Life PH Church. Call for more information.

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And this week, as we go out into the world, let's remember the words of Peter, written 2000 years ago, and spoken to us today:

Finally, all of you, live in harmony with one another; be sympathetic, love as brothers, be compassionate and humble. Do not repay evil with evil or insult with insult, but with blessings, because to this you were called so that you may inherit a blessing. 1 Peter 3:8-9

I pray God's blessing on the work of your hands and your hearts,

Vonda

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Show, Don’t Tell

warningsignShow, don't tell. Yeah, yeah, yeah. You've heard it a thousand times. But it IS the writer's mantra. And it should be.

Instead of telling readers what is happening, we want them to view the scenes as a movie in their minds.

Imagine that you're writing a scene where an old woman with a soothing voice enters the room. As a writer, you can simply tell us, "An old woman toddled into the room. Her voice calmed my nerves."

That's telling. It's lazy writing. And it will get you nowhere with a publisher or an agent.

In her book, Home Another Way, author Christa Parrish gives us an excellent example of "showing" when she describes the old woman who had just entered the room.            

     She looked older than her one hundred years, if that was possible. Her skin, the color of cinnamon sticks, hung loosely over her skull, as if she borrowed it from someone much larger, or bought it off a clearance rack. Age spots clung to her cheeks like leeches. Filmy, sightless eyes peered out from between rheum-caked eyelids, and her earlobes hung nearly to her chin.

     But her voice was a lullaby of fireflies and snickerdoodles. My tense muscles    relaxed under her words.

Oh. My. Goodness. The beauty of that passage brings tears to my eyes. Is that an excellent example of showing or what? Can you see that woman? Can you hear her voice?

That, dear readers, is our goal. To write words that give birth to the emotion, the visual, the creative synapses of our minds. Or simply put, our goal is to write in a way that readers don't have to figure out what "old" looks like. After all, to a kindergartener, I'm old. But to a 90-year-old, I'm a young whippersnapper!

So show, don't tell. And in the showing, you may find an audience hungry for your words…and wiping away a tear at their beauty.

(Danger photo courtesy of FreeImages.co.uk)

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It's Kudos Week!

Congratulations to the following Christian Writer's Den readers. You're doing what it takes…and it shows. So, let's celebrate!

1.     Megan Vance's (PA) article, "What the Little Children Teach Me," was recently published in the online ezine called 4Him2u.  

2.     Nan Jones (NC) has TWO praises to share. First of all, she began a daily devotional blog, Morning Glory, that not only encourages but also helps to establish believers in their faith. She hopes to give them little nuggets of gold from God's Word. And secondly, Nan is looking forward to her first speaking engagement! She will be speaking to a Bible Study group of ladies at Clover Baptist Church in Granite Falls, NC on April 20th. 

3.     Cindy Shufflebarger (VA) Cindy's book, Dancing in the Rain…Finding Joy in the Midst of the Storm, will be released soon! She also will have a piece in the James Bell series, Extraordinary Answers to Prayer series, in Book 5 – Refreshed in the Spirit. PHOTO

4.     Marsha Fisher (NC) has just signed a contract as one of the authors for Love Is a Flame (which she says she found out about on this site!). She also says,  "I truly believe my attendance at last year's Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writer's Conference had everything to do with it!"

5.     Ginny Brandt (SC) is ANOTHER Christian Writer's Den reader who will be included in the Love is a Flame anthology! And, as we recently announced, her new book about her dad, Harry S. Dent, will be coming out in July.

6.     Colleen Luntzel (NC) recently had an interview posted on Murray Newlands-Marketing Blog. And if you're one who loves decorating and designing, you won't want to miss Colleen's blog, DesigningDNA. 

7.     Cherene Comick (PA) has started a new ministry and website for ministry wives in crisis. Hope for the Hurting will comfort women whose marriages have been marred or ended by their husbands in ministry.

Congratulations to all these writers!

Be sure to check back next week for a list of writing opportunities. And who knows–maybe soon we'll be celebrating with YOU!

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Do You Have Children Interested in Writing?

If so, be sure to take them to DevoKids, where I have an instructional piece, How to Write a Fictional Character. The article is targeted to kids, but it's good reading for adult writers, too! 

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And as we go into another week, let's remember God's command to show AND tell. Tell them the truth and show them the way.

Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works, and glorify your Father which is in heaven. Matthew 5:16

I pray God's blessing on the work of your hands and your hearts,

Vonda

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Does It Really Matter?

As you know, the first week of each month we take a look at a spiritual truth and its application to us as brothers and sisters in Christ. In the past we've looked at the first two questions God gave me as He began the process of making me into a new creation. The questions, "Who is it about?" and "What is my motive?" brought us face-to-face with the continuous struggle we have with our hearts.

Today we'll look at the third question: "Does it really matter?"

I have a profound truth to share today: None of us are called to a ministry of criticism.

Even though no official committee exists, it's easy to recognize its members. Perhaps you're one of them. I tend to maintain a cycle of joining and resigning this committee over and over, year after year. Let's face it, it's easy to see the failures of others. It's even easier to think it's up to us to straighten them out.

Now the truth is, God may have purposely placed us in a position to help someone with an issue. But before we move forward and act, we need to evaluate our hearts and monitor our minds with these additional questions:

  • Is it truly a problem, or is it just my preference? I'm learning that I don't have to say everything I think. I may not like the music, the bulletin may have glaring errors, and the nursery's new paint color may look like it came from the dump, but in the grand scheme of things, does it really matter?
  • Does it have eternal consequences? Is it an issue of sin, or simply a matter of tradition? Will it affect someone's heart for eternity, or is it simply my taste over theirs?
  • Can I make a difference? If it's a matter of maturity, can I mentor them into a place of seeking God's will in their actions? Can I help them grow in the love and admonition of the Lord?
  • Am I contributing to the Body's strength or to its weakness?

I wish I could tell you that once God gave me these questions, I corrected my mind and heart and my motives have been completely pure ever since. But that's not the way the Christian life works. If we're honest, it's an ongoing process in our lives. And that means there has to be an ongoing evaluation of our hearts, for both our personal and our writing lives.

So the next time we're angry and ready to give someone a piece of our minds, let's ask ourselves, "Does it really matter?"

(Photo courtesy of Bob Spalding Photography)

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It's Time to Send Me Your Kudos!

Have you had a new publication? Released a new book? Signed a contract? Built a new website? Started a new ministry? If so, I want to hear from you! Just email me with the following:

  • Your name
  • Your state
  • Your good news
  • Available links to your website and the publication
  • Lo res jpg photos of bookcovers

Next week we'll all celebrate with you!

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Where are You?

I'll be in the following areas in the next few weeks and would love to see you!

  • Spartanburg, SC April 10–The Writer's Express 
  • Rocky Mount, NC April 16–Parkwood Baptist Church Women's Event 
  • Washington, NC April 17–Southern Christian Women's Conference 
  • Middleton, CT April 23-25–Faith Christian Assembly Women's Retreat and Sunday Service

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And now, as we consider our relationships with others, let's focus on the words of Paul, written to church at Philippi:

Do nothing out of selfish ambition or vain conceit, but in humility consider others better than yourselves. Philippians 2:3

I pray God's blessing on the work of your hands and your hearts,

Vonda

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