Bitsy and the Mystery at Hilton Head Island Excerpt
Bitsy and the Mystery at Hilton Head Island
Sometimes it stinks being the only girl on the baseball team. And it doesnâ€™t have anything to do with being strong enough or fast enough or tough enough. Sometimes things arenâ€™t fair just because youâ€™re a girl. Take my trip to Hilton Head Island, for instance.
Everything was perfect that morning when we packed Coach Payneâ€™s rust-covered van and his wifeâ€™s red Civic Hatchback. My teammates stuffed all the suitcases, baseballs, gloves, and bats into the van while the coachâ€™s daughter, Nikki, and I crammed the groceries into Mrs. Payneâ€™s little car.
I had just finished painting â€śGo, Marlins!â€ť on the back window of the van when Coach yelled, â€śOkay, team, go ahead and get in while I check the oil.â€ť He raised the dented hood of the old van. â€śHey, Bitsy, are you riding with us guys?â€ť
Nikki opened the red car door and sing-songed, â€śWeâ€™ve got air conditioning.â€ť Her coal-black braids bounced with the beat.
I wiped the blue paint from my hands and studied the two cars. On my right, the hot, stale air from the van smelled like weâ€™d already been to bat nine times and were working on extra innings. On my left, a cool breeze floated from the Civic. â€śI think we girls should stick together,â€ť I said, jumping into the back seat. â€śHilton Head, here we come!â€ť
We were about halfway there when Nikki first got sick. And I mean really sick. And every time she threw up, I thought I was going to throw up, too. It was miserable. Have you ever tried to breathe in a closed car while somebody was hurling their guts? I rolled down the window. So much for air conditioning.
Three hours later, Coach and I were standing under the mossy oak trees outside the Hilton Head Urgent Care Center. The news wasnâ€™t good.
â€śBut Coach, what about equality?â€ť I crossed my arms and scrunched up my mouth. â€śYou always said it didnâ€™t matter that I was a girl . . . or that I was short. You said I could do anything.â€ť
Coach Payne rolled his midnight eyes to the sky and shook his head. â€śBitsy, you know this has nothing to do with being equal or not.â€ť
â€śWell, itâ€™s only because Iâ€™m a girl, right?â€ť
â€śOf course it is. But itâ€™s for your own good.â€ť He put his hand on my shoulder and talked to me like he was my daddy. â€śLook, Nikki and her mom have to go back home. A twelve-year-old girl canâ€™t stay with the boys and me without a woman around. You know that.â€ť
I knew that.
â€śBut I canâ€™t stay with people I donâ€™t know, either. Itâ€™ll be awful! What if they donâ€™t like me?â€ť
Coach rubbed his forehead and scratched his whiskers. â€śHow could they not like you?â€ť Then he took my hands. â€śListen, Bitsy. Just be yourselfâ€”your own sweet selfâ€”and youâ€™ll be fine.â€ť It sounded just like something my daddy would say.
Minutes later, I watched as Mrs. Payne helped her daughter out of the doctorâ€™s office and over to us. Coach leaned over and hugged his daughter. Nikkiâ€™s mom whispered something in her husbandâ€™s ear, gave him a kiss, and then helped Nikki to the car. The stink of vomit hung around in the air. When they reached the Civicâ€™s red door, Nikkiâ€™s mom stopped and turned back to me. â€śIâ€™m sorry,â€ť she mouthed.
I watched as she put my sick friend in the back seat and then climbed in on the driverâ€™s side. Mrs. Payne looked a little pale herself. I was thankful for the sweaty smell of boys and baseball. I turned to my Coach. â€śHow long can your wife hold her breath?â€ť I asked.
â€śNot long enough,â€ť he said. â€śNot long enough.â€ť
Twenty minutes later, Coach Payne turned onto the cement driveway and parked our van in front of the most beautiful house Iâ€™d ever seen. â€śHere we are, number 32 Barnacle Road, Port Royal Plantation, Hilton Head Island,â€ť he announced.
My mouth hung open as I stared at the mansion. The other Marlins looked just as impressed as I was.
Coach climbed out and I jumped from the passenger seat. It didnâ€™t take me long to figure out I had jumped into another world. Sure, I knew the rusted van was in bad shape, but it suddenly looked a thousand times worse once it was parked between the BMW and the Lexus SUV. A tall, thin man walked from the big car, while a beautiful woman with dark brown hair unfolded out of the black BMW. I wondered if she was a model. I ran my hand through my own dark curls and tried to smile.
The man grabbed Coach Payne in a bear hug. â€śJohnny, howâ€™re you doing, man? Whatâ€™s it beenâ€”fifteen years?â€ť
â€śYep, â€™bout that,â€ť my coach answered. â€śA long time since our college days.â€ť
The man shook his head and looked straight at Coach Payne. â€śYeah, those were some good times, werenâ€™t they? I wouldnâ€™t want to go back to college life again, but Iâ€™ll never forget those lean years.â€ť He looked far away for a moment. â€śYou know, thereâ€™s something to be said for the poor olâ€™ days.â€ť
Coach Payneâ€™s eyebrows questioned the man. â€śThere is?â€ť
â€śOh, come on, Johnny,â€ť he said, patting my coach on the back. â€śYou know there is.â€ť Then he turned to me and smiled, revealing his perfect white teeth. â€śSo, this must be Betsyâ€”â€ť
â€śBitsy,â€ť I said, too fast. â€śBitsy Burroughs.â€ť
â€śOh, Iâ€™m sorry.â€ť He put out his hand. â€śIâ€™m Coach Wilder. Steve Wilder. Looks like youâ€™ll be staying with us, huh?â€ť
But before I could answer, a girl with sandy-colored hair pulled herself out of the fancy black car, her pink tank top and lime green shorts perfectly matching her multi-colored flip-flops. She looked about my age, but thatâ€™s where the resemblance ended.
I tried to cover the stains on my second-hand clothes, but the stains won. Then I studied my green shorts. Grief! When did they get so faded?
The daddy model hugged the mommy model, who put her arm around the girl model. This is going to be a long week, I thought.
Coach Wilder motioned toward his family. â€śBitsy, Iâ€™d like for you to meet my wife, Nicole. And this is my daughter, Mallory.â€ť All the models smiled.
Were they laughing at my clothes?
â€śOur sonâ€™s with the team. Iâ€™m sorry, but the guys are a little slow getting out of the cars,â€ť Coach Wilder said.
I faked a smile back and turned to my own coach. â€śCould I talk to you a minute?â€ť I took a few steps and pointed. â€śOver there?â€ť
My sleepy-eyed, ragtag teammates began unloading from the van, as boys with matching red and yellow River Cats shirts jumped out of the SUV. Coach Payne and I stepped behind a large oak tree. â€śPlease donâ€™t make me stay, Coach, please. Iâ€™ll do anything. Iâ€™ll even sleep in the van if I have to.â€ť I grabbed both of his arms. â€śJust please let me go with you.â€ť
Coach took my hands from his arms, but he didnâ€™t let go. â€śIt wonâ€™t be bad, I promise. Youâ€™ll still be a Marlin. Coach Wilder will get you to our practices. The only difference is that youâ€™ll be staying at a different house.â€ť
â€śBut look at them. We donâ€™t have a single solitary thing in common. They have money, I donâ€™t. They have nice clothes and perfect teeth, I donâ€™t.â€ť I brushed at the stains on my faded shorts. â€śAnd little Miss Mallory looks like sheâ€™s never been dirty a day in her life!â€ť
Coach Payne sighed and gazed out over the yard full of boys. â€śIâ€™m sorry, Bitsy, but this is the way it has to be. Either you stay with the Wilders and the River Cats team, or Iâ€™ll have to call your parents to come get you.â€ť
â€śMy parents? Here?â€ť I threw my hands in the air and paced around my coach. â€śOh, greatâ€”thatâ€™s all I need! The River Cats would take one look at my rag-tag family and Iâ€™d never live it down.â€ť I plopped back against the oak tree and crossed my arms. â€śGrief!â€ť
A few minutes later, Coach Payne had my stuff unloaded and sent the team over to tell me goodbye. I hadnâ€™t moved from the tree.
â€śItâ€™s not so bad,â€ť Will said. â€śAt least you get to ride in a Lexus.â€ť
â€śWho cares about a Lexus.â€ť
Wade jabbed my arm with his fist. â€śYou better not give away our signals to your new friends.â€ť
I glared at him. â€śTheyâ€™re not my friends.â€ť
Josh leaned over and whispered, â€śMaybe theyâ€™ll feel sorry for you and give you some of their money.â€ť
â€śI donâ€™t want their olâ€™ money.â€ť
â€śIf youâ€™re not going to be on our team anymore, can I play first base?â€ť Darin asked.
This was getting ridiculous! â€śNo, you canâ€™t play first base because thatâ€™s my spot and Iâ€™m not going anywhere! And stop treating me like a traitor. This isnâ€™t my idea, you know.â€ť
Will took off his dusty Marlins hat and scratched his blonde buzzed head. â€śIt might not be your idea, but you sure got the good end of this deal. Iâ€™d be happy if I was you.â€ť
â€śWell, youâ€™re not me,â€ť I said, heading toward my Scooby-Doo suitcase. â€śAnd Iâ€™m not happy about it at all.â€ť